Hey aj,

Great job...I am not going to chastise you about spelling or gammer. However in media or print it is very important because many value your point with spelling. I think you cover the basics and supported them with enough stats not to lose the reader, but with enjoying our own resident journalist.

I personally would like to see more writers that provide an unique insight of opinion. That may mean in the research aspect of collecting data, you reach out to the coaching staff and provide a quote to highlight your unique insight. With personally working with media too much of my life, I think that is what truly separates the data collectors from the true journalist.

Good luck to you and it is exciting to hear of a new sport journalist stretching himself.